To: jsmith23@fairmontstate.edu
From: rocketgrrl1999@gmail.com
Subject: Assignment
Hey Dr. Smith
I can’t find my copy of the assignment you was telling us about. Do ya think you could get me another
one ASAP?
Thanks bunches!!!
Peace and love,
Jenny ♥
Problems: sender email address, subject line, salutation, grammar, abbreviations, tone, student name, emoticons
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To: jthomas75@fairmontstate.edu
From: jgreen67@students.fairmontstate.edu
Subject: Missing class
Yo! I just wanted to do a heads up about not showing up for class last night. The gf and I got into a fight (again) over $$$ (as always), and I just wanted to let you know why I didn’t show. Can you send me
everything I missed?????
Jordan
Problems: subject line, salutation, slang, abbreviations, symbols, student name
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To: jdickinson@fairmontstate.edu
From: jmichaels32@students.fairmontstate.edu
Subject: Friend
Heya Prof. D—
Imma not going to be able to make it to ur class tomorrow. See, I have a friend I’ve known since we was
kids and he’s coming into town tomorrow and I’m going to hang out with him and catch up on old times.
He’s visiting family and relatives in our hometown and I haven’t seen him since we was about 10 years
old and I won’t get a chance to see him again until who knows when. So, I hope u will forgive me for not
being in ur class tomorrow.
Later alligator,
Jeremy # 1
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To: jjohnson48@fairmontstate.edu
From: smittyboi304@gmail.com
Subject:
Hi Mr. Johnqson! 😊
I hope everything is okay with you, but my computer died. ☹I just wanted to let you know that the
assignment we have due tomorrow was on my computer and my brother and my Dad both say that I
can’t get it back. Can I get an extension until next week, maybe? It may be longer because I don’t know
when I’ll have a chance to get a new one because we are in the process of moving to a new house and
everything is kinda up in the air and all over the place! I guess that’s LIFE !!!
Smitty
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